Charles Duffie

First Runner-Up

Followed by Author Bio and Q&A

Theories of Simultaneous Love and Loss

EXT. FOOTHILLS — DAWN

High in the foothills, a lonely cul-de-sac cuts into the pines. Five houses sit on either side of the oval street. Built in the ‘70s, the homes show their age. At the far end, where the street runs into boulders and scrub, stands an enormous avocado tree. SAM BEAUMONT (67) walks toward the tree. Tall and thin, with white hair and gray eyes, Sam looks forlorn desperate adrift like a man lost in the woods, searching the ground for a trail of breadcrumbs.

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[START]

I know I promised to keep working. Write your way back, you said. I’m trying, Rosie. I’m even using your pocket recorder now because some of the real writers you worked with talked their first drafts. But it doesn’t matter. Turns out I’m a cliché after all. Sam Beaumont, retired English teacher, still chasing his literary dreams. I don’t think I have what it takes. I’ve started dozens of stories, poems, screenplays, one-acts. I rewrite and cross out until the sentences break down like faulty bridges and I sit at the end of a line or paragraph, stranded. I wish I could go back to the stories you were editing before you passed on. Remember the one about a kid who loves owls so much he volunteers at a bird rescue? One day he’s cleaning cages. An owl hocks up a pellet and inside, with the grain of insect legs and mouse bones, is a bus locker key. God, I want to know what’s in that locker. But I can’t work on those manuscripts anymore. Something about your final edit marks in purple ink. If I could just finish something new.

[STOP]

~

 

The last five years are digital, so I digitize the old photos

and watch random slideshows, you out of order, you free from time,

then choose a moment and zoom down, down to the pixels of you,

sifting love’s nucleic patterns geometric heart atomic ashes

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[START]

We’re all senior citizens up here, empty nesters, a few widowed, a few divorced. Most of us have family in other cities and states. We’re not alone, but on a day-to-day basis we feel lonely, like we’re orbiting the planet where we used to live. So we evolved into a geriatric family of our own. Potlucks every Friday. Matinees every Tuesday. Thursdays I do a grocery run for those who struggle getting down to the city. On Sundays, most caravan to church, Millie heads to her Zen temple, Hank and I retreat to Denny’s. I still hear you getting ready for worship. Sometimes I lay out a dress before I remember you’re not here. You know the routine, Rosie. But something different happens today. On my morning pilgrimage around the cul-de-sac, the only exercise I get these days, I find half a dozen avocados under the tree, chewed by little teeth. With all the development in the foothills, we haven’t seen a bear, coyote, raccoon, or even a rabbit in ten years. Maybe I can turn this into a short story: an old man, heart so broken everything runs through like water, finds hope in a few grubby avocados. I’m laughing because I’ve been trying to write big, wrestle death down to size, and here I’m thinking about avocados. But before getting started, I want to know what kind of animal it was. That’s a detail I don’t want to make up. The way the hillside spills down into boulders and scrub, I can’t get a clear view of the avocado tree from our house. So I set up a tripod ten feet from the tree, attach that wireless security cam you gave me last Christmas, run an extension cord, link my laptop to the camera, and just like that I have 24/7 live video. I go door to door, inviting our last neighbors over for an impromptu potluck. Millie’s especially excited because her husband planted that tree thirty-odd years ago. Now I’m thinking of a one-act play: senior citizens watching a video stream, breaking their end-of-the-road hearts like bread, waiting on the miracle of a fox or deer. What do you think?

[STOP]

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CHARACTERS

Sam: Retired English teacher struggling with the recent death loss of his wife.

Rosie: Sam’s wife. Fiction editor. Appears as a ghost, seen only by Sam.

Millie: Rosie’s best friend. Retired biology professor.

Hank: Retired insurance agent. In poor health. Uses a walker to get around.

Eva and Tom: A conservative couple in their mid-70s.

Other Senior Citizens have occasional lines, representing the small Community.

Scene: Sam’s living room. Nine women and seven men have arranged sofa, love seat, and dining room chairs into a half circle. Live video streams to a laptop on the coffee table.

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[START]

I know it’s impossible. But we all saw it, Rosie. It’s on video. Start with the details. That’s what you always said. All right. So we’re in the living room. The security cam streams to the laptop. Software corrects for night vision so it’s like watching a black-and-white movie. We see the avocado tree and scrub, and farther back, the slope of the hillside. The app is set to record so we won’t miss anything, but we’re barely paying attention. We’re talking about travel plans and grandkids, current events and medical procedures. Around 9:30 PM, I notice three hamsters the size of poodles sitting under the tree, chewing avocados. Millie leans close and touches the screen. That’s impossible, she says. Those are Sardinian pikas. They’re extinct. She hobbles outside on bad knees and thirty seconds later we see her on the video, a petite woman with short gray hair, print blouse, flood jeans, and sandals. The pikas stare at her, crouched like scared rabbits, wary but unwilling to abandon the avocados. Millie glances at the camera, says, You have to see this. Then she backs up out of the camera’s view. The pikas relax, like Millie’s not there anymore. We walk out into the moonlight. There’s Millie, the camera on the tripod, and the tree behind her. But no pikas. It takes a couple seconds to realize the avocados are floating a few inches off the ground. Tiny chunks dig out of the green flesh as if chomped by invisible animals. Hank catches up, pushing his walker. Millie leads us forward. As we step past the camera and under the branches, the pikas appear like an edit, avocados held like green bowls in their paws. It’s disconcerting because they really do look like enormous hamsters. Startled by so many intruders, they hop away—and just vanish, like they hopped right out of existence. Like a magic trick. We all look at each other, little smiles of confusion on our old faces. The video, Millie says, let’s check the video. Hank is so shaken I have to help him back. In the living room, I pull up the recorded video file, fast forward to the moment we appear, pause as the pikas run, then advance frame by frame or whatever it’s called with digital video. The pikas vanish in a click, Rosie. Click, they’re here. Click, they’re gone, leaving only the tree and scrub and that haunting angle of hillside. We all start talking at once. It’s impossible, what’s going on, it’s a glitch in the video. Millie quiets us down. I think we’re all relieved she’s taking charge. We’ll meet tomorrow night, she says, see if it happens again. Then she looks at me and says, Keep recording, Sam, so we don’t miss anything. I notice Hank by the door, sitting on his walker’s padded seat. You OK? I say. He gives me a hard grin then stares down into his clawed hands as if he just dropped something precious.

[STOP]

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EXT. END OF THE CUL-DE-SAC — NIGHT

Sam walks all alone to the tree and stares at the half-eaten avocados, bulbous seeds scarred by sharp teeth. He follows small animal tracks across the dirt. The tracks end abruptly, as if the animals leapt into the sky. He looks up. Half the night is blotted out by the umbrella of the tree, the other half bright like spilled salt like the shattered spine of the Milky Way with connect-the-dot constellations.

~

[START]

I wish you were here, and not just for the usual lonely reasons. You were more at home with the supernatural. You truly believed you were phasing out of that hospital bed into glory. But you’re just atoms now, Rosie, and these one-way conversations are hard to sustain sometimes. Anyway, I can’t sleep, not after what happened tonight. I lay on the couch and watch the live video stream, waiting for the pikas to return. They were beautiful, eyes large as dimes, shiny as ink. It’s almost dawn now. I open the recorded file and fast forward to the frame before the pikas vanish. I copy/paste that moment into a photo app and zoom in, looking for a difference, a transparency, some sign that the pikas are less substantial. I keep leaning in, past the point of recognition, but don’t see a thing.

[STOP]

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~

Sam,

I told you my last check-up was good. Full remission. Truth is, old doc Isaac gave me six months. This time the quack is right. I feel myself going, and each morning less of me comes back. I’ve always been afraid of dying. Long as I can remember. Told myself over and over I’d go in my sleep, trying to program my subconscious. So what happens? I take the scenic route. Open heart, chemo, stents and pills, and still I hang on. But last night, when I saw those animals appear and vanish, something came loose. I felt released, like I let go of a rope I’ve been clutching. I’m not afraid anymore. So tonight I’m leaving on my own terms. Don’t hold it against me, Sam. I called my daughter, told her I loved her, but of course couldn’t tell her what I was planning to do. Will you call? Make sure she’s OK. And just between us, I hope your Rosie was right about the nature of things, because dying is an awful way to go.

Hank

~

[START]

I check on Hank this morning. Through the window I see him slumped sideways in his walker. The paramedics call it an overdose of pain meds. After the coroner takes the body, I find a sealed envelope with my name on front, his daughter’s number on back. I call and listen to her cry. I cry too, for Hank at first, then for myself. You’ve been gone six months and I still feel like my heart has been hulled from my chest. Jesus, laughing and crying at the same time. I’m sorry, Rosie. I just had an image of my heart popped out of my chest like an avocado seed.

[STOP]

~

[START]

We gather again in the living room. Hank’s reaction to what happened last night hits everyone hard. He was family, and we didn’t see it coming. To comfort ourselves, we tell stories about all the hobbies he took up when he retired. Most of us bought one of his awful paintings, and that crooked birdhouse still hangs on the fence in the backyard. Birds won’t go near it, I say, and everyone laughs. And cries. Around 8 PM Eva points at the laptop and says, It must be windy, look how the leaves are moving. Her husband Tom says, That’s not wind, it’s birds. He’s right. We were expecting the pikas to reappear on the ground so we missed the birds already in the tree. They’re beautiful, like doves but wilder. I turn up the volume on the laptop. They coo a loud rhythm like an enormous heartbeat. Here we go, Millie says. Those are passenger pigeons. They once flew in mile-wide flocks across North America. They’ve been extinct a hundred years. We walk out into the night. The leaves are trembling here and there but the branches are empty. No birds. No cooing. Millie stops us behind the camera, then steps forward until she’s under the tree. She says something but we can’t hear her. I touch my ear and shake my head. She steps back. Make a circle, she says, so we can find the area of the anomaly. Millie, always the scientist. We stagger ourselves around the tree, a few yards beyond the reach of its branches. Now move forward, Millie says, and stop when you see a bird. Some of us take a single step, others walk until they’re under the tree. The birds just appear on the branches, tucked in and around the big leaves. They’re beautiful, Rosie, tall and regal, with spotted wings and peach-colored breasts, like Plato’s ideal form of a pigeon. There must be hundreds of them, purring like cats, so loud I cover my ears. Millie has to call my name twice. Put a stone behind our heels, she says. I find big stones along the hillside and mark everyone’s place, including my own. As we step back, the passenger pigeons vanish. The branches are empty again, the night quiet, only a few crickets and a lonely night bird crying up in the foothills. I look at the crooked line of stones. They make a lopsided circle, enclosing scrub, the tree, and the camera. Even though I placed the stones myself, the ring looks ancient, like something you’d find on Easter Island. Back in the living room, I play the video and it’s all there. I toggle to the live stream. We watch like a jury with our notions of reality on trial. One bird flies off, triggering a chain reaction. When they pass outside the area marked by our circle, they vanish. It takes Millie half an hour to convince us to keep this to ourselves. This is our home, she says. This belongs to us, whatever it is. If we go public, it means an investigation. Government agencies, corporations, universities. They’ll take it away from us. Bring in equipment, cordon off the area. But I’m not ready to let go, she says. And looking right at me she adds, Don’t you want to see what happens next? I know what you’d say, Rosie, so when Millie puts it to a vote, I vote to hold on to the mystery. The vote passes eleven to four.

[STOP]

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Scene: Denny’s All American Diner. Stage left, a claw machine piled with unreachable toys. Stage right, an empty counter. Center, Sam and Millie sit in a booth.

MILLIE: You’re trying to make this personal, Sam.

SAM: I’m not making it personal. It is personal. Look at Hank.

MILLIE: Everyone reacts differently to the unknown.

SAM: You’re the one who brought up parallel universes.

MILLIE: About that, I called

SAM: Just hear me out. We evolved opposable thumbs because tools made it easier to survive as individuals. We evolved faith in the supernatural because belief made it easier to band together and survive as communities.

MILLIE: That’s basic evolutionary psychology, Sam.

SAM: I know. I looked it up. But. What if belief is more tangible than we assumed? Go back far enough and all the continents were one land mass, right? What if the same is true for alternate realities? What if all realities once overlapped, and belief evolved as a response to that dimensional experience? A merged reality where things could be dead and alive at the same time. Then over millennia, our continental realities drift apart. We continue to evolve in our single reality, but belief is still there like a psychic opposable thumb, grasping for something it can no longer see or touch. Maybe that’s why faith ran so deep in Rosie. Maybe she tapped into that primal sixth sense in a way I couldn’t.

MILLIE: You’re developing a story, Sam, not a theory. I called an old colleague at the university. Told him I had read an article about parallel universes. He laughed it off. Said there was no consensus on the multiverse. Then he told me about something called the Block Universe Theory. Said it’s widely accepted among physicists. The theory holds that all moments, past, present, future, exist simultaneously. We’re experiencing this moment (raps knuckle on table) because that’s our perception in this moment. But all moments are relative to each other. So right now, I’m also being born. Right now, I’m also teaching my first graduate class. Right now, I’m also dying. Each experience is as real to the me in those moments as this table (raps knuckles) is to us right now. He compared history to a book, each moment a page, one on top of the other. So there’s no Hollywood time travel paradox nonsense. Every moment is simultaneous, interacting with and influencing every other moment in some as yet unknown way. We’re not a line, we’re a stack. He called it being “temporally distributed.”

SAM: Could the pages in the stack get mixed up?

MILLIE: Those Sardinian pikas were indigenous to the Mediterranean and went extinct three hundred years ago. The passenger pigeons were indigenous to North America and went extinct in the 1930s. My husband planted that avocado tree here in 1989. That’s pretty mixed-up.

SAM: So can we read this book of simultaneous time? Can we turn to any page?

MILLIE: Don’t get literal, Sam. The book is just a metaphor. In a quantum universe, knowing is a long process.

SAM: But how does it work? Can only two moments overlap or

MILLIE: We don’t know.

SAM: But why can we see ourselves in the circle but not hear when

MILLIE: We don’t know.

SAM: But could other

MILLIE: Sam?

SAM: What?

MILLIE: We don’t know.

~

[START]

Pikas, passenger pigeons, what next? Some of us are excited, some scared. Expectations are running high. We gather in the living room, picking at our Tupperware potluck, and watch the laptop. You’ll never guess what happens, Rosie. The most unexpected thing of all: nothing. For hours we stare at tree, stones, scrub and hillside. Everyone goes home and my heart drops like a sinkhole. I think it’s gone. The mystery passed over us like a cloud. Then, tonight—I wish you were here. Tonight a group of women walk into the circle. They wear sleeveless vests, colorful wraps around their waists, bands of metal on their necks and wrists. They stare in awe at the tree. I bet, Millie says, the tree wasn’t there for them yesterday. The women talk in a language none of us recognize. We go outside and it’s just the tree. We can’t see the women, can’t hear them. We stand behind our stones like we’re going to step across together, but we just look at each other. I notice the gap where Hank stood last night. I think of you. You wouldn’t wait here. So I take a breath and, as Millie calls my name, I step into the circle. The women stare at me, terrified. I must have just appeared like magic. They approach, fear blushing their brown faces, talking in their hypnotic language. I look around the circle but everything is the same. I don’t see their world, I see our cul-de-sac. Our friends outside the circle, the hillside, houses. So the women must see their own reality too. Whatever’s happening is limited to this ring of stones, this common ground. The women kneel at my feet, whispering, pull bands from their wrists like offerings. I accept one. The metal is warm, the surface hammered with runic patterns. If I take their hands, could they lead me out of the circle into their time and place, or could I pull them into ours? That scares me. I back out of the ring and they vanish. No one crosses over, not even Millie. From our point of view, Millie says, you were alone. Everyone wants to know what I saw and heard. We go back to the living room and watch the recorded video. I pass around the bracelet. Switch to the live view, Millie says. The women are gathered around the tree now, hands raised. They offer a last melodic prayer then walk away, vanishing as they leave the circle. We can’t take our eyes off the screen. My heart is pounding. You’d say that was a tired phrase, a heart pounding so hard it’s in your ears, but that’s how it is. Because if lost civilizations can walk into that circle, what about more recent loses? What about lost husbands and wives, brothers and sisters, parents and children? What about you, Rosie? I look around at my cul-de-sac family and see my own ache in their eyes. Don’t make mystery personal, Millie says. But that’s exactly what we’re doing.

[STOP]

~

[START]

I can’t believe only four days have passed since this began. I loop ten seconds of the recording, watch the women offer their bracelets like a scene in a movie while holding one of those bracelets in real life. The two don’t seem connected. I press my fingers into the bracelet’s interlocking runic patterns until it hurts. The women on the video, their eyes are wide with belief, an instinct that was native to you but foreign to me. I take a screenshot, paste it into a photo of you, compare their pixels to your pixels, zooming in, trying to see a difference. If matter can’t be destroyed but only converted into other forms of matter, if energy is constant, if we live in a Block Universe where past, present, and future are pages in a book, if we’re simultaneous stacks and not one-way lines, then you’re still here. I keep zooming in. Laid side by side, the pixels look like a code of light and dark. I don’t know what story they’re telling but find comfort in the patterns. Don’t let the tears fool you, Rosie. I’m happier right now than I’ve been in a long time.

[STOP]

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~

Dear Millie,

Tom and I have decided to spend a few weeks with our son in Arizona. We don’t feel safe here anymore. Especially Tom. This whole thing has unnerved him. And I’m not in such great shape myself. We’re scared, Millie. What if the circle expands and swallows us up like a temporal black hole? I’m sorry. I’m just writing whatever comes into my head. Keep us posted, will you? We’re curious. We just need to be curious from a distance. We’ll abide by the vote for now. We won’t tell anyone. But something has to be done, Millie, and soon.

With love, Eva and Tom

~

[START]

After Millie reads the note aloud, the Thompsons admit they’re thinking of doing the same thing. By morning they’re gone. Our family is down to twelve, Rosie. In this moment, here and now, it’s eleven. But I’m counting you, wherever you are, so it’s twelve. We keep meeting in our living room. After the women, nothing happens for five days. Millie tells us about the Block Universe. I talk about continental reality drift. Everyone has a theory. We exchange science articles like kids doing homework, share links like treasure hunters. We’re on a sliding scale, the more religious of us on the miracle end, the more scientific on the quantum end, the rest of us tumbling in-between. Each morning I fast forward through the previous twenty-four-hour video file. But it’s just tree, stones, scrub and that tilt of hillside. I upload an audio clip of the women to Google Translate. Even Google doesn’t know what to do with those ancient cadences. An estate sale sign appears on Hank’s lawn. We know we can’t keep the mystery to ourselves much longer. Millie says we should turn everything over to her friend at the university, but we vote her down. Not yet, we say. We bring scrapbooks and photo albums to our nightly vigils, pass around old pictures, tell stories with details we thought we had forgotten. Somewhere along the way we stop using past tense. We talk about the dead as if they’re standing just outside that circle, waiting to cross the line of stones. Millie keeps saying, Don’t make this personal. First, she says, we don’t really know what’s happening out there. And second, even if this is some accidental tunnel through simultaneous experience, it’s clearly in motion and at random. You have a better chance of winning the lottery than seeing lost family walk out under that avocado tree. But didn’t you once tell me, I say, that the odds of life on earth are too astronomical to calculate? Yet here we are. Shut up, Millie says, and we all laugh. We know she’s right but we can’t help it. These last few days heal something inside us. Death isn’t a one-way street anymore, loss isn’t so wide. We meet each night with our scrapbooks and our stories like we’re planning a family reunion across the borders of time.

[STOP]

~

 

This morning I almost go for a hike. You loved these foothills.

I remember you staring at a tawny deer like it was God’s burning bush,

and I felt that too, that sacred love, but I wasn’t looking at the deer.

I thought I missed you so much because you were gone forever.

I thought I clutched my grief because I was sliding down that slope too.

But maybe that’s backwards. Maybe I can’t let go because you’re still here.

If past present future share one space, then the heart’s density

is undeniable. By comparison, a neutron star is light as air.

~

[START]

You should see us, Rosie. Our odd little clan. We still do the everyday stuff. Take our morning walks. Stay in touch with friends and family down the hill. We even went to the matinee on Tuesday. People drop by the living room day and night to watch the laptop. I almost offer to connect everyone’s phones and tablets and computers to the camera’s signal. But then we’d lose our community, our shared stories. We talk about the past like it’s news and act as each other’s priests, forgiving lost sins. We laugh and cry and watch and wait. The unreasonable hope is still there. Hope that we’ll see our loved ones again, that I’ll see you again. But it’s deeper than that. Something is happening. A subtle evolution. I miss you in a different way. It’s grounded now. As an editor, you’d say that’s too vague. But I don’t know how else to describe it.

[STOP]

~

[START]

For the first time I’m glad you’re not here. Oh, Rosie. I don’t know if I have the heart to describe what happened. The details. Always start with the details. We meet as usual, our little church of longing. Tonight a group of bare-chested men walk into the circle. They point at the tree, prowl around it, hefting crude stone axes. The first blow takes a piece out of the trunk and we jump like the axe punched into our own chests. No, Millie says, her voice a gasp of pain. Her husband’s tree. We go out into the night and stop a few feet from the circle. We can’t see or hear the men, but we see pale scars appear on the trunk, chips of bark fly, big leaves spin to the ground. I grab at Millie’s arm but she’s already across the stones. She raises her hands in a gesture of peace. She’s talking but we can’t hear what she’s saying or see how the men are reacting. It happens so fast, Rosie. She’s smiling, waving her hands, gesturing at the tree. And then… then she snaps around, a gash in her forehead, crumbles like her body is just clothing. I start to move but hands grab me, pull me back. Someone whispers, They’ll kill you too. I slap myself loose but Millie looks up at me. She holds out a trembling hand and I stop like she pushed me back. Then a red line opens in her throat and her eyes dim and we do nothing. We just stand and watch, tears filling the cracks in our faces. We watch as she dies. Watch as invisible axes hack our tree down. Branches fall, the wide trunk breaks into segments, pieces float away on unseen shoulders, vanishing outside the circle. Someone calls 911. I don’t know who. I hear a siren. Someone goes to check the laptop, comes back and says, They’re gone. I step into the ring and sit on the ground by Millie, lean over until my eyes are in her vacant line of sight. Blood darkens the dirt under her silver hair. The tree stump looks like a splintered stake driven into the earth’s heart. I stagger away as the paramedics work. I come back here, to our house, get your pocket recorder and pace the living room, talking and sobbing until the police knock on the door.

[STOP]

~

[START]

It’s rough going at first, but with the video files and camera our story proves itself. Millie was right, of course. Government agencies and private companies roll in. We’re put in quarantine for a few weeks, tested and observed, then released with a paycheck, our houses purchased out from under us at twice their market value, our personal items moved into storage. The cul-de-sac is secured but it’s not some trope conspiracy. They hope to explore it. They show us hi-tech instruments placed around the stump, in the ground, on guide wires overhead, recording every spectrum and wavelength. They even share new video clips of peoples and animals I don’t recognize. One clip, I swear, Rosie, is of a dinosaur, that one with the horns on its head. This discovery, they say, is going to change the world. They intend to go public in a few months and ask us to keep quiet until then. We sign an agreement. Millie’s death is reported as local crime, which from a simultaneous point of view it is. We all meet again at her funeral. It’s a beautiful service, Rosie. We take turns telling stories. She was one of us. Is one of us. Afterwards, most go to live with kids or siblings, but we’ll keep in touch. Belief is an evolutionary bond. I rent a small place halfway down the hill. I want to stay close. I write every day, and I’m hiking again. I play the old slideshows, you out of sequence, you free from time, but it doesn’t feel nostalgic anymore. It feels closer than that. As real as here and now. As now as now. Maybe my perceptions have been altered by proximity to the mystery, or maybe it’s all simpler than that. Maybe the heart itself is a Block Universe.

[STOP]

~

EXT. FOOTHILLS — DAWN

Sam climbs a rocky path. He stops on a ridge and looks across the folds of land rolling into hills, and beyond that a few snowy mountain peaks, and beyond that stars fading in a purple sky, and beyond that the invisible universe stacked forward and back to the Big Bang and beyond like pages in a book too big to read let alone finish. Sam catches his breath and continues along the path.

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